~
there is a sudden softness
of the invisible
emerging into the vision beyond slow darkness
an undefined warmth
that saturates inner wind
with blossom of the clouded moon
each time
i await the somber hour of wakefulness
and i wonder if you feel
when i breathe soundless dreams out
cherishing a thought about your arms
because
Dear One
where i am
but in a hidden note
of the nightingale’s voice
singing a canticle for your star
a tiny ode for your spirit
shining
on the horizon
of infinity
i only hope
one morning
you melt my lips
and we fly
until then i’ll be
as unfallen snow
in the stillness of winter sky
~
yelena, 2013
Dreamy, full of sweet longing, and gorgeous. Felt myself holding my breath as I read this. Wonderful work Yelena.
thank you a lot, Jennifer, this one was not easy to write and i’m so glad it’s appreciated.
Enchanting! “as unfallen snow / in the stillness of winter sky” wears a special magic … I am very happy that your poetic snow keeps on falling : )
merci dear Martin.
Of course, it is the writer’s woe and the reader’s bittersweetness; so you know that my happiness is ambiguous.
Very dreamy and love the closing.
if only for the “unfallen snow” and this piece is to die for…
So dreamy…I love this…where i am
but in a hidden note
of the nightingale’s voice
singing a canticle for your star
Such lovely and beautiful lines specially these:
where i am
but in a hidden note
of the nightingale’s voice
singing a canticle for your star
Just lovely. k.
Ohh… When I realized it was a dream, I felt sad because that level of joy should be real. Beautiful
Amazingly provocative. Bravo
this is very lovely, perfect, Yelena